
Hello classmates!
How are you?
The topic today is "childhood memories."
I have many fond memories of my childhood, but today I elect only one memmory from my childhood and so I write about my first bike and rides that had mounted on it.
Well, I was 5 when I received my first bike for Christmas, I remember that this night I was with my family sitting by the Christmas tree and we listen a noise, then my mother opened the pert and there was my bike with a great gift ribbon.
My first bike was white with purple color in the wheel had a white basket, behind had a grill, my brother sitting in grill and the bike also had training wheels. I liked my first bike, it was very beautiful !
The wheels of my bike support were very important to me because I could not ride it. I needed the support wheels for a long time to maintain balance.
However, after supporting wheels were a problem, because they could only walk at low speed and I liked to compete with my friends, but they went very fast in their bike and I always lost, because the support wheels could only ride slowly.
Then one day I decided to get the wheels on my bike, I got on it and walked quickly to achieve balance and avoid falling. That day I walked several hours on a bicycle. I was very happy because I felt "free" because it could pedal faster in many places.
Well, my first bike is one of my favorite memories of childhood, because that Christmas night was special because my family was together and in this time my desire was have a bike to learn to ride it.
See you in class next week!
Hi Tamara.
ResponderEliminarYou got 2 points on the task
1 point for voc and grammar
2 for coherence
5 points: 4.o
You were penalized because you did not write your post in time.
Paula